I've kept to the heavily edited versions after the little mermaid incident.

[........what he thinks of. well.]

It's bad? [eloquent] I'm on board trying to fix things from the outside, since that seems to be the only option. As well as having to take the deal.

[he is not quite at the acceptance part of it meaning he and his sister die tho. even temporarily?? so he's not. gonna mention that one.]